This is reposted just as it was originally written**
Dear poets and poetically-minded friends,
I conjured this up on my commute to work this morning. I'd love to get some feedback.
Turn off your ‘Shift’ key, America
by Danial Orange
if we turn off our ‘shift’ key, america
instead of talking @ people, we’d have to talk 2 them.
we’d be forced to see that hatred, fear and ignorance
are problems that exist within the US
because they really exist within us.
people in our nation’s capitals
would have to pay attention to our nation’s lowercases
living in lowerplaces, earning lowerwages,
with children exposed to risk at lowerages.
we’d place more value on =
and less on having +
if we turn off our shift key, america.
with ‘shift’ on, our thoughts are all $!
switch it off and we could be all 4 1
and maybe 1 4 all.
there’d be less emphasis on “I”
if we turn off our shift key, america.
**Photo taken my moi!
4 comments:
Very clever, excellent stuff!! :)
There is such a sweetness to this post. Lovely idea, very poetic.
Oh wow, this is a powerful, powerful message. Thanks so much for reposting it.
So imaginative, thoughtful, and right on; thanks for sharing Dan's words with us. Off to share the URL with my network.
Peace, Judi
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